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There’s a Very Good Reason Why I Don’t Write Prologues by Allison Merritt

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Wystan (The Heckmasters) is the first book in a trilogy about three half demon brothers who guard a portal to Hell. Their lives are turned upside down by the arrival of a schoolteacher no one asked for, her quirky little sister, and a strange woman they can’t quite pin down.

Today, I want to share the omniscient prologue-that-never-was. This is so embarrassing. No one has ever seen it before, not even my editor, for good reason. *hangs head in shame* Please, feel free to read it in Sam Elliott’s voice.

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Berner is a blight on Hell’s backside. It ain’t on a map and ain’t no one would want to visit if it were. There are legends about this town, before it ever earned its name. It was a pretty place, green pastures and clear streams. They called it Hope Valley. But darkness descended on it like a bad storm.

It started with a comely young woman named Eusalace, whose family settled the land where the town is now. She was all set to marry a well-to-do widowed doctor until a stranger rode into town. Called himself Richard Heckmaster and he was liked by folks right off. Clean, well-dressed, and manners to make any mother weep with joy.

He swept Eusalace off her feet and right into the bed roll he’d set up in her daddy’s barn.

Things got funny after Heckmaster came, that’s certain. Livestock died mysteriously, a drought rolled across the countryside, the crops that didn’t parch were eaten by locusts. Some folks started talking, saying a witch had come and cursed them. Fingers pointed, but mostly they settled on Heckmaster and Eusalace. In order to spare their lives, the couple fled and it weren’t long till things returned to normal.

A handful of years passed, and life flourished. Until the day Eusalace rolled into town with a broken down wagon, a half-starved mule, and three round-faced boys tugging at her skirts, no husband or lover in sight.

Months went by before the problems started. Same as last time, milk cows went dry, crops became diseased. The whole mess repeated itself.

Eusalace gathered the boys in the dead of night and prepared to sneak them out of town. The townsfolk had been waiting for just such a move and the second Eusalace appeared with a carpetbag in her hand, they snatched her.

Thou shalt not suffer a witch and they made no bones about helping one meet her end while her boys watched. But if the folks in town thought Eusalace’s death would solve their grievances, they sure thought wrong, because you can’t kill a demon’s wife without paying in blood.

Just like the night Eusalace Heckmaster died with Hope Valley’s citizens chanting “Burn her, burn her!”, the wind still whispers those two mean words. And what was left after the blood bath that Heckmaster brought gained its name. Welcome to Berner, New Mexico. If I were you, I’d get the hell out of town.

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Book Blurb:

Wystan72webHer search for safety lands her in a totally new kind of danger.

When Rhia arrives in a small New Mexico Territory town for a teaching job, she discovers an empty town, no job, and a handsome sheriff who refuses to welcome her.

Son of a demon who dared love a human, Wystan guards a Pit locked with seven seals, and slays any demon that attempts to free the master imprisoned within. He can never be the man Rhia needs. But when the truth behind Rhia’s journey comes to light, Wystan must open his soul—and pray there’s enough love to overcome the darkness rising from the Pit.

 

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Author Bio:

author photoA love of reading inspired Allison Merritt to pursue her dream of becoming an author who writes historical, contemporary, paranormal and fantasy romances, often combining the sub-genres. She lives in a small town in the Ozark Mountains with her husband and dogs. When she’s not writing or reading, she hikes in national parks and conservation areas.

Allison graduated from College of the Ozarks in Point Lookout, Missouri with a B.A. in mass communications that’s gathering dust after it was determined that she’s better at writing fluff than hard news.
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21 thoughts on “There’s a Very Good Reason Why I Don’t Write Prologues by Allison Merritt

  1. Thanks so much for hanging out with us today, Allison!

  2. I don’t think you are giving yourself enough credit. I found it rather interesting and it made me want to add your book yo my to read list. Part of that could be the cowboy voice in my head I read it with. Because I haven’t read the rest of the book I cant day if it would have been bad for the book, but I like it for what it is.

  3. Having read Wystan, I know the story. The prologue is not bad but it is backstory and it’s all told, rather than shown. I think you began the book in exactly the right place, with the schoolteacher rolling into town.

  4. I found it really interesting, so perhaps I am tasteless. Makes me want to read the book as well!

  5. I enjoyed it, but the editor in me would give you a hard time…lol. No matter it still holds appeal 🙂

  6. I actually enjoy prologues that set the pace for the story. But I know a lot of editors don’t. Those that are done well are perfect for a story.

  7. OK, Allison, but I really like this line: “Just like the night Eusalace Heckmaster died with Hope Valley’s citizens chanting “Burn her, burn her!”, the wind still whispers those two mean words.”

    Thanks for sharing your (not-so-shameful) shame. This is the kind of thing I love seeing on LL, those bits others aren’t privy to. They make for great (no, really!) reading.

  8. I like prologues, they set the stage. Makes me want to read it.

  9. Thank-you, I want to read this, sounds good

  10. It played out very much like a movie in my head. I think it was all that narration. 😉 Thanks for sharing this scene with us!

  11. Reblogged this on Reviews & Recommendations and commented:
    I’d like the Prologue that never was. 🙂

  12. This book sounds really interesting and it will be cool to find out if love makes him stronger or weaker.

  13. It sounds really interesting. I look forward to reading it.

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